Monday, November 10, 2008

Spread Your Palm... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spread your palm
and place me on it,
softly like a dew-drop.
Close your fist
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Ankita Sharma 19 March 2010

this one was so interesting sort of new

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Tanvi Damle 17 March 2010

wow..i so love it! ! beyond great...srsly...realli gud!

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Reshma Ramesh 08 June 2009

wow! ! beautiful................

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 January 2009

wow...so touching.. it touched me in the way i don't know.... honestly, i cant really understand my feelings after reading this so beautiful..... SPREAD YOUR PALM..goes to my fave....10++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 November 2008

poetry at its best...an excellent piece, Sarvesh...i admire the noble thoughts behind this write...10

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 20 November 2008

Great poetry! I got lost in this one.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

This is quite extraordinary poetry. Great imagery beautiful composition to a splendid effect...........10

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Indira Babbellapati 11 November 2008

can't imagine such profound thought coming from one so young as sarvesh...when i read the first few lines, i almost felt the dew-dropp in the cup of my palm!

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Pooja Ladyluck 11 November 2008

simply gr8.......a very profound tht....well written.......so b'fully xpressed.......u got gr8 talent......trust me.....ur thts.....r out of diz world......gr8 yaar......luved it! ! ! thanx....

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