Spread your palm
and place me on it,
softly like a dew-drop.
Close your fist
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wow...so touching.. it touched me in the way i don't know.... honestly, i cant really understand my feelings after reading this so beautiful..... SPREAD YOUR PALM..goes to my fave....10++++++++++
poetry at its best...an excellent piece, Sarvesh...i admire the noble thoughts behind this write...10
This is quite extraordinary poetry. Great imagery beautiful composition to a splendid effect...........10
can't imagine such profound thought coming from one so young as sarvesh...when i read the first few lines, i almost felt the dew-dropp in the cup of my palm!
simply gr8.......a very profound tht....well written.......so b'fully xpressed.......u got gr8 talent......trust me.....ur thts.....r out of diz world......gr8 yaar......luved it! ! ! thanx....
this one was so interesting sort of new