Thursday, November 10, 2005

Sport Comments

Rating: 4.7

Running frenzied through the forest
Screams and bugle calls and howls
Panic grips my fragile body
Causing twisting in my bowels.
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Jon Lloyd
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Gina Onyemaechi 04 August 2006

Good protest piece. And thanks for your comment on my poem. Regards.

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Declan McHenry 15 November 2005

Jon, I think you're captured well well here both the atmosphere of the actual moment and the sentiment surrounding it. Agit Prop poetry! Regards from a too occasional sab.

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