Spoonerism Picnic Comments

I'm still not sure what a 'spoonerism' is? But, I'm not one to 'nicpic'... funny stuff and awesome word play! ! Brian

I thoroughly enjoyed this one Chuck! Your wordplay is enviable. Have you written a 'malapropism' one yet? ? : -) Justine.

haha, I'd forgotten about 'Spoonerisms' - love 'ick' and 'still' best! ...And what's sweeter than delightfully wasted time? ... LOVE the ending because, well, you know it happens! Very clever and as Ernestine said, nicely constructed too. 10 from a fan!

Very amusing and a neat way to rhyme, also nicely light in tone.

This is a nice one Charles, the story leads the way, but the spoonerisms sound really good within it. Very well done indeed. Nicely constructed. Love Ernestine XXX

Nice one Charles. This is put together really well and it's not clever-clever, it works because it flows well.