Sunday, April 23, 2006

Spontaneous Combustion Comments

Rating: 5.0

While the three elements
of any significant fire,
oxygen, heat, and fuel,
create flashovers cruel,
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William Jackson
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Jocelyn Dunbar 05 September 2006

Wow very good. What a wonderful and colorful wisdon God gave in to all individual in a different cathegory of element, amazing indeed! and you've got one wonderful color of wisdom.

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Preeti - is here! 27 July 2006

Passion is on full blow. Love the way you've talked about passion without talking about the usual things! Preets

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Ernestine Northover 27 June 2006

This one makes fantastic reading. Hot off the press. I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Love Ernestine XXX Bless you for your comment on my poem.

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trisha evensen 24 April 2006

william, It seems you are lucky to have found your passionate desire and are combusting! I just love this........slow peak of passionate lyrics Trisha

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Patricia Gale 23 April 2006

A splendid write the true passion one can have for another.Hotter than the fires of Hades.How well I recall that fire with found memories.Well done Patricia

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Ray Lucero 23 April 2006

William, If God smiles upon us, He blesses us at least once with this kind of relationship. Alas for me, it was a High School romance. Everyone else has paled by comparison. We must grasp an opportunity like this at all cost or regret it the rest of our life. Nice poem...thanks...it stirred me inside, as I'm sure writing it was for you. Regards, Ray

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David Tanguay 23 April 2006

Good one William, she must be quite a woman (I really like this poem)

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