Thursday, August 2, 2012

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the chatter of children
on the morning of Christ's emergence
& a cat scratching at the door
seeking the comfort of flames
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Lindsay Smith
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Diana Van Den Berg 02 August 2012

Superb! Again, the ampersands disturbed me - but a lesser criticism than those of about 50 years ago, methinks. My favourite part is... the whole poem, every word, le mot juste. Owl

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Lindsay Smith

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Mataura, Southland, New Zealand
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