Friday, October 23, 2015

Spoil Curry Comments

Rating: 5.0

This life
Is very simple
And so beautiful it is.
It's creative, innovative
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Savita Tyagi 27 November 2015

Enjoyed this spoiled curry analogy very much. As a cook so close to my everyday life. Little out of proportion and you got a rotten dish on hand. Life is very much like that.Thank you for sharing it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

Your title of the poem is so justified. Really a person intoxicated with vices is nearer to spoiled life. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. - - 10

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Those six vices, spoiled our life, that's true,

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Lyn Paul 24 October 2015

Great truth in your curry. We put so much into living, all we ask in return is those simple things.

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Bakuli Bhakali 24 October 2015

well depicted Amitava......! ! ! !

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Amitava Sur 24 October 2015

Thank you Bakuli for appreciating the poem.

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Sandra Feldman 24 October 2015

You're second stanza describes well what most politicians and criminal people do. Those things sure spoil life's curry, not a very nice thing to do to such a delicious stew. Excellent poem, Thank you, dear Sir.

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Amitava Sur 24 October 2015

I thank you for reading the poem and making comment on it.

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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