Friday, September 22, 2017

Splosh Is Heard Comments

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Splosh is heard near stream,
Near river splosh is heard,
As water moves there in flow,
Soft splashing sound comes.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 20 March 2019

Amazing splosh is heard and you have nicely written this lovely poem.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Hearing the splosh is great. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2018

Soft splashing sound! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Luo Zhihai 28 September 2017

Spolsh is heard Money, soud of water, soul's tear, fatherly love, xll the poetic moods!

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Practicing Poetess 22 September 2017

I love this one! Although the line about Virtues give gentle sound sort of stopped me in my tracks, for I always perceived virtues as being silent. But maybe not silent, just quiet, in which case your words are accurate- - quiet is a gentle sound, not a loud one. Thank you for this picturesque poem of splosh! :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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