Tuesday, June 8, 2004

Split-Feelings Comments

Rating: 2.4

I'm sorry that it was you in that crash
I'm sorry that you got hurt
I'm sorry that you're in the hospital
I'm sorry that I can't be there
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Ashley Olson
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Mary Nagy 27 April 2005

I actually really like how you split the emotions into the two groups........I've never seen it done quite this way.......very creative. Nice poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Sandra Osborne 28 February 2005

Nice poem, and the form inspired me. Thank you.

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Andrew Corrao 27 September 2004

This poem was great. It reveals a lot of compasion and love between sisters. I can realte to this in many ways and that is why i love it so much

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Ashley Olson

Ashley Olson

Torrington, CT
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