She pulled it out,
pain is emotion
rigid and stout
full of devotion.
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Ah yes, the master of double entendre! Funny poem. Raynette
I didn't actually read into this what I'm seeing Lawrence did but I thought it was a really good poem Herbert. Sincerely, Mary
I like this 'piece' Herbert! Some 'Splinters' can be quite painful. Especially, if one has been 'splintered' for the first time. LOL...you are such a 'visionary'.
I enjoyed this one very much, H. Wow.