Saturday, September 3, 2005

Splinter Comments

Rating: 3.2

She pulled it out,
pain is emotion
rigid and stout
full of devotion.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 September 2005

I enjoyed this one very much, H. Wow.

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The Master is correct.

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Gainor Ventresco 03 September 2005

VERY CLEVER! ! ! ! Gainor: -)

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Raynette Eitel 03 September 2005

Ah yes, the master of double entendre! Funny poem. Raynette

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Mary Nagy 03 September 2005

I didn't actually read into this what I'm seeing Lawrence did but I thought it was a really good poem Herbert. Sincerely, Mary

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 September 2005

I like this 'piece' Herbert! Some 'Splinters' can be quite painful. Especially, if one has been 'splintered' for the first time. LOL...you are such a 'visionary'.

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