Thursday, March 15, 2018

Splendor Of The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

M-ist and fog are gone,
E-vading the beacon's rays,
A-s the warm light shines.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Mj Lemon 15 March 2018

Warmth and splendor! This makes my day, Bernard. Wonderful poem....A! 0!

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Perdita Young 15 March 2018

Warmhearted lines are indeed a best gift... The young lady is so pretty.

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Nudershada Cabanes 15 March 2018

The sun's splendor is well painted in this acristic haiku. Fantastic 10

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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