Wednesday, January 18, 2017

Splendor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its leafy splendor
Spreads, cathedral-like, its dome.
I sit in worship,
Steeped in the Spirit of One,
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Lynn W. Petty
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Bri Edwards 11 August 2017

oops! read it already. well, no great harm done; it is SO short word-wise anyway. i wonder if you are speaking of a tree with which you have had a real experience. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 11 July 2017

as you use a hyphen for Soul-bound, i think i'd also use a hyphen for cathedral-like. what say you? ? ? my relationships with trees have not been so......................emotional. but trees are great and great big oak trees are exceptional! bri :) danke for tanka

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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