Splendid Nightmare Comments

Marie, I enjoyed this... you show promise and should keep writing.I like the line, 'i feel the night envelope my obsession' Now for the constructive criticism: -) 1) Try writing in Word or some other word processor and use spell check. 2) Let your work sit overnight or so and reread it; I find reading aloud helps here. 3) Watch out for mixed tenses and subject/verb agreement Hope this helps