Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Splashing Cove Comments

Rating: 5.0

I start my dream from a water fall.
No matter how deep it may go.
Some time it may not last too long.
Wave on! Wave on the motion.
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AKHIL RAVEENDRAN
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I see splashing cove, But I try to flow with my soul. Nice sharing, thank you.

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I start my dream from a waterfall No matter how deep it may go...... Nice thought! A very nice poem with a wonderful meaning.... Nice work! Dear poet!

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Akhil Raveendran 13 May 2016

thank you for reading..

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Seema Chowdhury 08 May 2016

Very powerful and a meaningful write

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Akhil Raveendran 08 May 2016

thank you..

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Shrutika Kahale 23 April 2016

remember how far you are and how far you have to go! great piece of work

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Akhil Raveendran 23 April 2016

thank you shrutika.. go with your passion

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Farisa Haleel 23 April 2016

Want to chase all my drops, want to chase all my thoughts.......]]] lines chased me a lot...... Superb.....

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Akhil Raveendran 23 April 2016

thank you farisa.. but don't fall for a emotion.. ha

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Kelly Kurt 22 April 2016

A wonderful poem, Akhil. Emotion may be what sets us apart from other animals, but uncontrolled, it is not an asset

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Charming.Enjoyed reading.Giving 10

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Akhil Raveendran 22 April 2016

THANK YOU SINGH

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Clarence Prince 20 April 2016

... Wave on! Wave on the motion... You can't stop the wind, but you can adjust the sail Well said, Akhil, this is very good poem. Thanks for sharing it with us!

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Akhil Raveendran 20 April 2016

thank you very much sir... with respect..

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 20 April 2016

True fountain of the heart, marvellous poem, thanks

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Akhil Raveendran 20 April 2016

thank you mam..

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Yes, you can reach the ocean, till you create confidence and idea to reach, you can do it. Very nice.

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Akhil Raveendran 20 April 2016

thank you ram .. you motivator me to do this.. thank you

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Haruna Garba 19 April 2016

start my dream from a water fall. No matter how deep it may go. Some time it may not last too long. Wave on! Wave on the motion. well projected. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhil Raveendran 19 April 2016

thank you sir

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 April 2016

A splashing cove! ! Nice piece of work. Yes, you can always talk to me.

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Akhil Raveendran 19 April 2016

thank you very much.. Edward Louis

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