Sunday, April 2, 2006

Splash, Plath Comments

Rating: 5.0

Suddenly the plane door opened – I, easy in my place,
Was sucked up like a bird into a jet
But hurtled out and down down down fell Alice
Into a nightmare vortex where I met
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Linda Hepner
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Gina Onyemaechi 03 April 2006

Feel like I've just been swept up by a tornado then spat back down again, landing with a thud. Another high-impact write, conveying so well the sense of panic and despair. And hey, a woman who gassed herself to death is the perfect allusion to relate this piece of writing to. Gina. PS: I recommend you to check out 'Sylvia' by Gregory Gunn.

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***** ********* 02 April 2006

An excellent poem of confusions spiral, we all feel sometimes, just like Alice Linda. This poem has power and pace, I love the title drawing upon Plath and her despairing losing race. 10 from Tai, hoping you are well

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