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Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Splash Of Sunhine Comments

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Lonely by the lake shore
So calm, quiet and the tides low
Staring at the horizon
Picturing if it would be a friendship zone
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Teddy temple

lonely sunshine Staring Friendship

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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

splash of sunshine nice title. keep writing

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Jesse Ellsbury 23 July 2013

I really like the near rhyme in this: alone/gone, horizon/zone. And using the verb splash to describe sunshine is so well-placed. Nice job!

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