Well all I wanna do is spit and lay some tracks,
just looking for a good time, just looking for the craic*
but now with all this shit going down in politics,
and the world being ruled by a bunch of lunatics,
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A nice poetic imagination, Peter. Unbelievable ideas with an impressive impression. Very sincere write. Thank you very much,
Hi Master Strugnell! There's nothing new nor frontal in what you say; millions feel that away, but the way you say it and the language you use - the everyman's lingo, without (perhaps only) beating about the bush makes your poem a necessary rap these days, and I wish someone or other would let the fire in it all burn with fury and the tempo of bloodiness in his voice for all to hear. Good luck! Every good wish. Wignesan
Many thanks T Wignesan, I'm sure you're right, it is simple, direct and maybe a little obvious, it expresses my sense of impotence when faced by powerful people and institutions. I was stung into writing this following the Brexit referendum whereby as a British citizen resident in Europe I didn't even bother to find out if I could vote in the Uk! no I have to suffer the consequences.