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Dr.Balnarayana Bandam
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Ink of Sin 20 June 2018

Dear Poet I've learned - A Haiku consists of 3 lines and 17 syllables. Each line has a set number of syllables see below: Line 1 – 5 syllables Line 2 – 7 syllables Line 3 – 5 syllables but you are composed- The spirituality, alike, consumer book = 13 syllables Ideal-living to adopt, awaykeeping is = 13 syllables Putting finger and getting shocked = 8 syllables sorry for this comment

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Dr.Balnarayana Bandam

Dr.Balnarayana Bandam

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