I would not trade my tears for oceans of smiles
I would not trade my pain for the handful of joys
For this pain has taught me to grow as a human being
It taught me to love every little bit of God's existence
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hi Arzoo, Love of this world detaches me from my own existence- what an observation! Great poetry! Thank you for sharing and giving me a fantastic subject think and enjoy.
It taught me to love every little bit of God's existence This pain has seeped into the depth of my soul And made me realize the difference between human and God's love It learnt to cherish the sweetest melody of a broken heart Now I want to fill my soul with longing and fulfilment of God- - beautiful beautiful. wonderful poem. i envy your love for God. you are poetess divine. thank you. tony
Very soul-stirring poem with a touch of Sufism. This poem describes the rich experience of a journey, from the worldly desires to the love of God, from the material to the spiritual world. The love of this world detaches me from my existence...so beautifully put. A man's final destination has to be God's love.10 definitely.
Great work! This pain has taught me to grow; understanding my inner self; with the works of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Dard jo marz ban jaye to zindagi se aur bhagwan koi shikayat kyun aur khafa kyun....Lovely poem beautifully narrated....thank u for sharing :)
Search for true fulfillment is never ending, I admire your view on life. Speaks to me on a different level and I hear it with a different octave. Thank you for sharing your wisdom. Well received,