Sunday, February 4, 2018

Spirits Of Dark And Angels Of Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I close my eyes and wonder
Was there ever a time of peace on earth?
Was cursed Kaliyuga ever not upon us?
Was this soil ever not colored with blood?
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Savita Tyagi
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Susan Williams 07 May 2018

Congratulations! It definitely deserves placement in an anthology.m Savita. Like a shadow sorrow follows joy, ==isn't that the truth? Was there ever a time of peace on earth? Not if people have any say in the matter. Very good write.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

This world is a world of contrasts, we have choice to be good or to be bad, let us be good and do good. A thoughtful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2018

Like a shadow sorrow follows joy, Like night gives birth to eternal sun. And sunset brings out the glorious moon Only to be followed by a new moon night........loved these lines, haunting expression. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2018

Like a shadow sorrow follows joy, Like night gives birth to eternal sun. And sunset brings out the glorious moon Only to be followed by a new moon night.....loved these lines, haunting expression. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 07 March 2018

Evil and goodness exist side by side! From time immemorial, there have been wars and rebellions. Weapons of war are not something new! But through all darkness, there have been light bearers and people who brought joy to mankind! So there is a kind of balance preserved all through! You have well captured the contradiction of life and living! A profound write!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2018

It's a sublime piece of work! Each line carries priceless substances! I would quote just two lines here: Like a shadow sorrow follows joy, /Like night gives birth to eternal sun........Thanks dear madam for sharing..10

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Rini Shibu 04 February 2018

Wonderful poem 2 faces of man as wolf and as lamb, very nicely depicted

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2018

An amazing write that echoes peace and friendship. It also bites at the flaws of humanity. Beautifully crafted and well executed piece. Liked the 5th stanza.10

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Gajanan Mishra 04 February 2018

to rejoice in light, good one

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