Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Spirits Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drain your whiskey bottle into the ocean
Refill it with your saltwater tears
Divided, or concentrated
Medicinal influx, cathartic exodus
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Jeff Wrubel
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Dr Antony Theodore 19 April 2016

Would the sea need your whiskey as you did? Does the bottle need your tears as you do? .. a very fine poem. you provoke the reader to think, simply that is the ability of a real poet to bring the reader to think......... thank you. dear poet. tony

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