Spirit Of Fire In The Water Comments

This is one of your finest, Soul. It reminds me of Robert Frost's Fir and Ice. Both have a certain passion. Both can be a road to destruction....and the eradication of passion. One seemingly cannot exist without the other. You've provided so much content for profound thought, Soul.

The weaving of tolerance and harmony, heat and coldness is so enchanting and fantastic. It is a beautiful metaphor related to body, mind and spirit. It is a didactic poem from where we learn to be cool from wrath. An excellent work.10.This poem goes to my poems list.

Ever So Beautifully Described! ! ! ! ! Ever So Deep! ! ! ! ! With Such An Ever So Beautiful Passionate Heart! ! ! ! ! That So Ever Kindly And Deeply Shines! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Soul! ! ! ! ! ... Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Your Words Could Never Be Bla, Dear ((Poet))) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...

I love the weaving of these two elements into the emotions and egos of people who are very different. Fire and water...much respect between these two elements. Too much fire can burn and evaporate. Too much water can drown or douse enthusiasm. A lovely write.

In such flow! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The message of tolerance and harmony, you have put across in a very effective way! Fires of anger should be extinguished with the showers of tolerance and love! The ice of coldness and bitterness should be melted by the warmth of forgiveness and understanding! Great write!

awesome dear unwritten soul u have a powerful ignition to write keep it up impressive..

Dear Soul, your words have such meaning. You are a true story teller and your painting is truly amazing.Thank you

an enticing title and an enthralling journey in the read, quite mystic :)

Wow! You really have a very creative and imaginative mind! Speechless! I feel like I have been touched by and angel by reading this beautiful and thought provoking write! You are the best in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Also thank you so much for all your valuable and highly appreciated on my poems! People as beautiful as you keep inspiring me and believing in LOVE! God Bless You!

I'm truly amazed by your far imagination, by the depth in choosing the suitable colours for that great beautiful amazing picture, you're using s pecial kind of magic that get the reader's mind out of his head, to make the heart fly freely with the beautiful imagination in your poem, my HONOURABLE friend, whatever you did, what spell you used, I wanna get back my mind :)

Yes, true, very different people can live in harmony, you showed here how two opposite things can complete each other. Very nice, thank you for share.

The parallel line drawn between the human relationship and water, fire is unique. Thanks for this novelty of thought.You have told the subject-matter of your poem neatly.10++++

I have nothing more to say because you have told much in poem and with its post script. So, much..........

Its Fabulous...! ! ! Fire & Ice..i loved it..

Its Fabulous...! ! ! Fire & Ice...I loved it...

Its Fabulous...! ! ! Fire & Ice...I luvd it......

Liked this one! Very good imagery! waiting for another... -Kelly.

Bravo, what a nice poem.

Beautiful poem, Soul. Very nice expression of the duality of water and fire and their very miraculous characteristics and interplay. The deeper meaning also fantastic. Great piece of poetry. Hans