do you know that wave
that shroud you and take you to the deep?
if you take risks, of course
or the taste of the air at 1.800 meters of height?
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wild poem, full of challenge to the reader... I like the way you pack spirituality within a touch of poetical violence... the metaphors are well done.. I really enjoyed reading :)
very good poem, with descriptive elegance. Well done!