Saturday, June 2, 2012

Spiral Words Comments

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Memories within a mirror-
Memories that infuse life;
Life blows like a breeze
Disappears in the eternal silence
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Swetha Vanakayalapati 06 June 2012

spiral words.....to infuse life.... on ignition fuses perplexes.... all in all....poet as right to quest, to entrust he is not one... many....are broken inside glowing outside...

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Pheko Motaung 06 June 2012

Great poem! An amazingly fantastic read.Thank you

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Indira Babbellapati 04 June 2012

very apt concluding line.....

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Eric Cockrell 02 June 2012

we are scars planted, and the tears of our suffering that fall to feed the thirst... we are light born of darkness, returning to darkness... great poem.

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Unwritten Soul 02 June 2012

It really a spiral one, a helix structure...coiling around the art of words..and it's poetry nice to mind and smile to our fce_Unwritten Soul

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