Thursday, June 20, 2013

Spinster Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every day after walking the dog I slip
Into the café and every day she walks in alone.
Toast washed down with tea then reads the paper.

No suitor for her, her barriers and defences are up
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COMMENTS
Unwritten Soul 22 June 2013

You are very talented, know how to make a write alive...what more to say? haha_Soul

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Lorraine Colon 21 June 2013

I felt sad reading this. But that means you did a great job expressing yourself. Well done!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 June 2013

Wow Your selection of words as usual a pearl and this is lovely with imagery nice

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 June 2013

A rare beauty like a wild cornflower Blowing in the wind... Beautiful way to describe 'she was delicate, willowy'. Your feelings are finely embedded. Thank you.

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Poetheart Morgan 20 June 2013

what a beautiful looking! You can see what nobody else sees! Just beautiful

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Lyn Paul 20 June 2013

Love the description, A wild Cornflower and a spinster with so many stories to tell. How wonderful it would be to hear those stories. My 92 year old neighbour tells me such beautiful stories. Thank Yoou David

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