Spinning Life Comments

A magical poem of Life penned. Simply amazing.

What a poem full of wonder at the creation we stand on, breathe in, and touch with our hands and our spirits. Beautifully crafted poem and I am enthralled by your extensive vocabulary that works to increase and define the wonder you have felt.10+++++++++++++++++++

Nice work. You know, we are a body of matters that work systematically as you said the mixture of those atoms may sounds simple but complex in real to arrange and centralize like that. I think though we were created by scientific way but the mathematical probability may sound impossible especially survival rate in each reaction can be low. Only precise reaction can bring us. May Lord guides us in blessing path. Nice poem i like the topic u pushed.

Well desires are being spinned throughout the poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us

Well done, Marieta. This keeps the reader hooked until the very last lines: I'm not sure I deserve to be saved by The Lord, but I keep hoping. You certainly do deserve it, and you deserve high praise for this poem!

A very clever and wonderful poem, you weave your rhythm so skillfully!

All our wonderings and questions will not be answered In the spinning of life. Well penned poem.10

The question of life exsistance. Nicely scripted.