She went round, round on one spot
Till her heart thumped, her head ached, giggling
Flumaxed, smiling, eyes searching, shrilling laughter
Panting, striving to keep her feet, her head spinning
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A bag full of emmotions collected and arranged on parchment nicely done my friend top marks Chris
Great alliteration, visual images, sensory details. A kaleidoscope of fun!