Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Spinning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blinking in and fading out,
Consciousness is high in doubt.
Swimming in a sea of fog,
Sight gives out but not for long.
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Jessy Liz
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Isaac Helms 12 May 2006

nice poem short and to the piont sweat poem.. i give it a ten

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