Friday, October 18, 2013

Spilling Milk..... [oops! ; Refrigerator Accident; Personal] Comments

Rating: 5.0

I may have caused a great big mess.
If I knew for sure I did it, I would confess.
SOMEONE placed an open carton on its side.....
in refrigerator, and from the carton milk did slide.
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Bri Edwards
COMMENTS
Poetheart Morgan 13 November 2013

Hello teacher! ! ! ! Good in English but not so good in clean the mess? ? ? Oh! your wife was right. Yes, put you out of the kitchen, kakakakakaka

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Khairul Ahsan 07 November 2013

Enjoyed reading the poem, as also the comments.

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Ramesh Rai 29 October 2013

enjoyed your write. to blame our wife is a natural cause and finally to bow down is also a natural cause.so no matter if there be an achievement like creation of long poem. thnx for sharing. regards

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Valsa George 28 October 2013

I guess that you spend a great chunk of your time in the kitchen.... pondering over what to eat and drink....! ! Nothing more is needed other than your profile picture to designate you as a gourmand! You are not only lucky to have a wife who puts on you a few restraints and also who puts up with you......! ! ! (should I say...?) ....(Not serious) Thanks for your comments on my poem When Poetry Haunted me. Can't you spare a senile soul for minor lapses of spelling... you 'hawk eyed critic'? Enjoyed the mishap in 'white' that left your kitchen black and white! ! Ha! Ha!

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Kanav Justa 25 October 2013

Hahaha.... an advice.... do all the cool stuff that your lady doesnot Want you to do... in the end just write a long poem.. about it... and you will be safe..

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Danny Draper 21 October 2013

There's sense in writing after spilt milk after all. You were diplomatic and did well to avoid a row, perhaps it is now an appropriate time to invest in a dairy cow?

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