Tuesday, May 19, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Spiky Spine Of Ego Comments

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I offer myself as…… clay
Spiky spine of ego removed
Make me unmake me
Knead me into deformities
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Rehan Hyder
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WOW..a wonderful powerful writing.. sincere desire to be as a clay, may be can be given as a gift on a plate of love to her.........excellent... loved it....10+++++++

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Indira Babbellapati 27 May 2009

engaging read, my friend...

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Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

That ''I offer myself as…… clay/Spiky spine of ego removed'' needed to be simile but just finished to be a metaphor.Just perfect.I love it.10++

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Francesca Martin 25 May 2009

very interesting and clever, you once again write a great one!

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