Friday, June 11, 2021

Spider's Duet Comments

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Two spiders dance cross ivory keys
The sounds they make reprise songs of trees
Phantom fingers flick like legs from hands
Over blacks and whites on baby grands
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Greg Gaul
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bri edwards 11 June 2021

Fine rhyming. 'Reprise'? I had to look up verb-definition: ': to repeat the performance of'. I like your poem. In title, did you mean 'Spider's' or 'Spiders' '? bri ;)

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