Spider Woman Comments

the spider is an amazing little creature which is patient.nice work on this poem here

You utterly fascinate me Callista. Did you ever read the poem 'Will You Walk Into My Parlor said the Spider to the Fly? Not only have you used brilliant imagery, but you have given me information about spiders. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

I gave this one a ten, and I rarely vote.

dreams are like web, , every night, , and the blue blood with many eyes, , , you communicated what you feel, , , that is what poetry is here..10

I'm tempted to offer the fly but will I end up being decapitated or fascinated. Top marks again.

This really pullled me in... Yes.. fascinating!

Repulsive, no.........fascinating, yes! A great write!

The poet demonstrates her flexibility here - a comic piece contrasting strongly with the earlier human crisis works. The piece uses rhtym while still maintaining a flowing fun style, with rhyme just for the nice little punch line. Spinnarets for cob-webs - now thats a word to treasure. It was good fun to be put in the situation of imagining one-self a repulsive yet fascinating insect.Very strong work.

There is nothing to feel neophytic about here... you are having me on aren't you? ? ? The natural instinct of a spider is to spin... and you have a web that might net a fisher-a-men or 2 for a bite.... Ivan I see is on to it! ! ! ! 10tacles from me!