Saturday, October 4, 2008

Spider Web Of Faith Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like the first cracks in the ice of a pond
My heart began to break and fall apart
Desires and plans slipping through the cleft
Pieces falling into the cold water of sorrow
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T.James Becker
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Dee Daffodil 16 October 2008

I would say this is a very good description of exactly what happens when love begins to break down. Great poem! Hugs, Dee

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 16 October 2008

Wonderful Tj. Good philosophy and expressions. Liked it very much.

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Linda Moore 05 October 2008

Wonderful writing, remember even if faith is as small as a mustard seed.......10

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Viola Grey 04 October 2008

I do believe spiderwebs are extremely strong, so hold on to that thread....what an incredible talent you are blessed with....great work

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T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
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