Like the first cracks in the ice of a pond
My heart began to break and fall apart
Desires and plans slipping through the cleft
Pieces falling into the cold water of sorrow
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Wonderful Tj. Good philosophy and expressions. Liked it very much.
Wonderful writing, remember even if faith is as small as a mustard seed.......10
I do believe spiderwebs are extremely strong, so hold on to that thread....what an incredible talent you are blessed with....great work
I would say this is a very good description of exactly what happens when love begins to break down. Great poem! Hugs, Dee