Saturday, October 6, 2012

Spider Web Comments

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After two days of welcoming summer rain, morning is cool and calm.
I came out with a cup of tea to feel the warmth of morning sun,
To watch the green grass, the dark, damp, water-soaked tree trunks
Freshly bathed leaves with their rich green color
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Bri Edwards 06 September 2019

" The quest for gnosis so intense in human heart" do you keep a thesaurus at your side? " gnosis" . cool word. i'm an agnostic, but 'never' heard of gnosis, not even when i roomed with Aristotle. your last four lines (among others) are wonderful! but check semicolon after " spider" . :) to MyPoemList bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 07 September 2019

Thanks Bri for your comment and for catching the mistake. Staying in the company of good poemHunter poets is equal to having a Thesaurus!

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Valerie Dohren 07 October 2012

Beautiful write, full of imagery and very thought-provoking.

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Neela Nath Das 07 October 2012

There is a divinity in your write.Very philosophical thought. It also, makes me think, who is behind the rhythm of creation!

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