Sunday, October 12, 2014

Spider, Spinning, Smiling...... [spider; Short; Humor; Revenge; Creation; Fantasy] Comments

Rating: ★2.5

The big black and hairy spider
slipped quickly up beside her.
She, a helpless buzz-less fly,
had landed on web; I knew not why.
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Bri Edwards
fly grief october sorry brother humor
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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 October 2014

I'm scared of spiders..... so i can appreciate your poem.

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Valsa George 15 October 2014

Quite an intersting tale....Sweetly rhyming and rather funny! When we try to trap others, we might also fall in traps! 'Serves right'!

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Douglas Scotney 12 October 2014

I agree, there's all of that, Bri.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2014

Very beautiful and meaningful poem. Spider is nice.

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