Spider Prey/Spider's Prey/Spiders' Prey (Take Your Pick) ..... [long, But Worth It I Hope; Personal Spider-Fantasy; Humour/Humor? ] Comments

I wonder what part of the poem was real and what was fantasy? Hmmm Oh well, I really enjoyed it, even though I found myself getting a little creeped out. Actually, it was like a really cool horror story/poem. Ok, not that scary, 'cause I laughed most way through it.

What a mind you have i am a fan of spiders so i have to say i am more on their side than yours. i enjoyed reading this well done Bri glad you were rescued

Hope u got my coment on yor spidr poem, for some reason it doesnt show to me. Hey n thanx for yor coment made me chuckle n laugh. Yeah i luv jasmine scents n crowded bus people ought to use nice scents eh.

So u mean dis is a mix of fiction n nonfiction? ? Was it a black widow spider dat wantd to make yor wife a widow? ;) . But i tel u im totaly wowd n floord by dis imagination's tale u hav wowen in once again scintillating wording. D spiders we get here dont bite. I giv u full votes even if epic.

Nice episode. An encounter beautifully described. Thank you.

What a terrible encounter.... So do you mean to say that the spider's venom turned you into another spider ? ? ? As soon as the spider attacked you, you fell into the tub floor. Then how come, your wife happened to see you hanging from the shower curtain rod? Reading this long, long story has been as painful as being bitten by a spider! (Just joking) Really Enjoyed! !

hey, bri, you have written a fascinating poem. i like it... read some of my popular poems.

i just edited my poet note, but since the change hasn't shown up yet i want to say: i must have made a hundred changes to this poem (mostly very minor, including spacing of phrases) today, including some after typing into computer, copied from my scribbled paper notebook. how could it have been so imperfect at first? NOW, of course, it IS perfect! :)