Tuesday, February 28, 2006

Spider And Moth Comments

Rating: 5.0

In front of the mirror, tilted downward,
Clad in a slip and plaiting her hair,
Black-brown tresses silk-shining, the girl sits
Absorbed in the silence.
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Brian Dorn 22 April 2006

An epic battle of survival played out brilliantly. Excellent write! Brian

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Dan Tharp 14 April 2006

Nature at its finest! Agony on one hand / wonder on the other. Beautiful and yet gruesome at the same time. dan

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 February 2006

such a vivid picture....nice!

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