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It was alone and helpless,
Didn’t know what to do at that place.

Still it tried and it succeeded,
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Parth Parekh
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 31 March 2010

One word I can use to describe this poem, beautiful. It is beautiful because of its theme, and it is beautiful because of the following: 1. Simplicity 2. Brevity 3. Clarity of presentation 4. Unity of thought You did this work very well. Bravo! 10++++++++

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