Sunday, September 20, 2015

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Spinning delicate webs of lace
Planning each strand with care
Intercepting the unaware fly
Devouring its very soul
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 19 October 2015

i'm not too good at planning building projects, so i guess i wouldn't be a good aka successful spider. they are 'cool' creatures who may exist long after mankind no longer does. good luck to them. gee, before i read acrostic as the 'form', i actually noticed it was one BUT it took about 3 readings and didn't happen until i was reviewing your effective use of verbs (all with -ing endings!) spiraling to a conclusion. well done. bri :)

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