Monday, October 28, 2013

Spider Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spider!
Should have stayed an outsider,
Should have known we’d not abide her.
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Stephen Katona 19 December 2014

We all loved this poem. It was such a comical relief to discover she'd been pretending to have died. I'm so glad we read it. I've made it one of my favourites to read again.

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Brian Jani 14 July 2014

wonderful little creatures they are.i like how you depicted the spider in this piece.

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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2013

spiders are not for me. a good write about them.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 October 2013

scared of spiders though, I couldn't help laughing at the end!

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John Brown 29 October 2013

This had me chuckling, and I kinda knew what was coming before it hit. You can't trust spiders you know.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 28 October 2013

An interesting poem indeed.

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