Thursday, August 15, 2013

Spending Time Together (Prose) Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I sit this morning sip
my coffee, thinking about
a lovely small island nation.

A house perched high on a hill-
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Heather Burns
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Geetha Jayakumar 16 August 2013

Beautiful poem. A fantastic ride on a magic carpet, to meet a poet friend, in moonlight and refreshing the old memories is so wonderful...Can imagine it..So well is the poem written. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 16 August 2013

I imagine you riding on a magic carpet to meet your friend in moonlight! Lovely imagination! ! |

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Aswath Raman 16 August 2013

A wonderful write ma'am. I think I know yur friend! A time of laughter with good friends is so refreshing!

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David Wood 16 August 2013

A delightful poem, love really does make the world go round.

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Dave Walker 16 August 2013

A great poem, to write poetry in the moonlight sounds magical. A beautiful write.

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Unwritten Soul 15 August 2013

This is what we called as Quality Time, feel free joy and content...and i feel it while imagine your words_Soul

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 August 2013

That journey on the magic carpet to meet the poet in the moonlight would be delightful indeed. Beautifully presented in the poem.

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