Spend Three Minutes Enjoy Three Sunsets/Risestwo Have Set Poem by me poet yeps poet

Spend Three Minutes Enjoy Three Sunsets/Risestwo Have Set

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Sunrises eternally

I saw this sunrise once before
I am seeing it again and again
such a lovely sun
we have all
what life does it contain
without it no life can we sustain

Alas the sunsets
off and again
but never ever in vain
as it rises again and again

Come see the sunrise with me
as in the mornings
we love each other
to be a rising sun
as such a one

So heavens
and my mind
help me
for mankind an
everlasting sun
may I forever be

Tuesday, September 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: natural,nature,poetic expression,sun,sunrise,sunset
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Two prematurely set
will salvage the sun sets

wait a moment
friends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 10 September 2020

a piece of sunrise a piece of warm kiss a piece of wet story a good introduction of day........let there be a light of life

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Varsha M 08 September 2020

Two immature sets Unite and make it complete Salvaging the sun sets Conquring the life's quest. Spend three minutes Enjoy three sunsets/sunrises Two have set...so creative Another wanting to get in. The pitcher fail to pour water As the stock is over Refilling can resolve Reorganizing can help us better.

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Kevin Patrick 08 September 2020

Come see the sunrise with me as in the mornings we love each other to be a rising sun as such a one Such a beautiful composition yeps, a soft and tender expression of the human heart, exposed with great warmth. Watching a sunset is one of the greatest of all human experiences, a free gift of life. This poem is a warm blessing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 September 2020

the error of nature is like CORONA VIRUS ATTACKS SOME LEAVES MANY AS DOES THE SUNSETS daily als it rises eternally

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