Spells Of The Desert Comments

My heart's pierced from love's arrows And like the wind, it finds no rest Like a Bedouin's eagle who never had a nest Following the caravan to the River Nile dont toss my love like a dice.... beautiful. beautiful. marvelous description of the desert and the desert life. i came four times to Egyptian desert. i was in dubai, abudhabi, sharjah. i know and understand what you write. this is a marvelous poem. God bless yu. thank you. tony. i shall add this in my favourit poems. tony

It's better to use dots at the end of the verse when the first word of the next verse is going to start a new sentence.Writing the first letter of the first word in each verse with a capital letter and without this dot, one can not easly find out the syntax of the text. //''who never had a nest'', instead who which? //I wonder how would it look like with these dots!

''From the first sight'' , it opens wide wide the gates your senses know and understand to find the delight in the magic world of the imageries painted.On the right path where great poems should be composed.