Sunday, January 20, 2013

Spellbound Comments

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My eyes and limbs were tightly tied
I was lying in a dark place.
I tried a thousand times to be free
To uncover my hidden face.
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Ketan Hukare
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Chinedu Dike 10 June 2020

A free flight of creative on winged imagination. Insightful quatrains nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Theodore Tilmoth 04 March 2013

If you let the girl you fall for read this, she will fall for you then- I'm very sure!

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Babatunde Aremu 30 January 2013

Good poem. This is an appreciation of God-sent messenger who came to deliver us from shackles. Keep writing, I lke this

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Mohammad Skati 28 January 2013

It's a great and sweet poem.I encourage you to write more and more.Good luck.

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Vivek Tiwari 27 January 2013

I hope this poem has some idea for someone endeared for you. The ideas is really awesome and lucid. Love the idea.

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