Monday, November 14, 2016

Spell Of A Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Far into the night
My dream comes alive
I burst into bloom
When I remember your smile
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2022

A magnificent poem. Liked the sweet comment of poetess Aarzoo. Top score.

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Susan Williams 03 March 2017

Love! Magical, world-changing, charming love. It sets your body on fire and your heart to smiling a smile you cannot contain. Such a lovely write and it captures that essence of love so well, my dear Nosheen. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Pamela Sinicrope 30 November 2016

What a pleasing, charming poem. A smile of recognition between two people who love each other is priceless. I also love the line, Thirsty for a drop of life.. When feelings are so ecstatic, that is when words like eternity and never come into the writing. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Muhammad Ali 24 November 2016

very nice poem, and what if I think it as Sufiana, for Him, Eternal.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 November 2016

Someone who is significant in our life when smiles everything all around smiles.

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Bharati Nayak 21 November 2016

I'm thirsty for a drop of life Step by step, word by word I come closer to you, merging Into the eternity of your smile Never to depart, never to stray. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The smile you treasure in your heart, the smile that gives you strength and now step by step you become that smile.- - - - -A lovely write, thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 17 November 2016

Superb poem, I wish this smile remains on your and everyone's lips and we all greet each other with it. Lovely poem, so refreshing and motivating. Loved it..10++++

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Valsa George 16 November 2016

In a few lines, you have so powerfully conveyed the strength and fullness.... someone's smile whom you adore in life would be giving you! I too hope, one day he will realize how much you treasure his smile and reserve it for you! Beautiful sentiments, so sweetly expressed!

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Barry Middleton 15 November 2016

I hope the person who wears that smile appreciates this poem as much as we readers do. Wonderful images of emotion.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

Step by step, word by word I come closer to you, merging Into the eternity of your smile Never to depart, never to stray... beautiful words play. Smile is such, it doesn't allow a person to depart or to stray... Thanks..10

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Kim Barney 14 November 2016

What a positive, fun poem. I love it!

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Aarzoo Mehek 14 November 2016

Let the smile fill your life with eternal peace and love. Beautiful thought well describes in beautiful words. It captures readers attention. bless you Nosheen.10++++ for lifting our spirits with awesome thoughts.

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