Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, February 21, 2012

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I was put on fire
The moment you left to admire
Taken me to task and she peeped into eyes
I lost the firm ground when she really tried
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Stevens Cadet 22 February 2012

Really like the flow on words & structure of this. Kept me reading and drawn in....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2012

seema chowdhury Very true a, an honest and a reflective write. your last stanza says it all.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2012

I was put on fire The moment you left to admire

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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