Sunday, November 23, 2014

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I heard little dancing sound
On roof top and window pane
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 24 November 2014

the roof and the window pane And the thunder smiling an evil grin............................really an amazing write.....enjoyed reading this poem...

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Valsa George 23 November 2014

This is a beautiful poem Deepak..... The sky turning stygian, the storm brewing, the thunder rumbling, the rain tumbling down and the Earth replenished with fresh verdure...... all described in great elan! A 10

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