Monday, December 10, 2012

Speed Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

What... are we doing?
Running, Rushing
Shouldn't we...
Be slowing Down?
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Lyn Paul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

I add: we don't have time to stand and stare to enjoy the beauty of nature because we don't have leisure!

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Anjandev Roy 31 July 2020

This is great write......true and perfect.......thank u......anjandev roy.

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Luz Hanaii 30 November 2019

So true, we rush through without admiring the beauty of life. Nicely penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Life is moving fast due to impact of time on it. We are feeling the truth behind universe. In silence generally we feel connection between life and universe. An amazing poem is beautifully written that attracts us to re-visit.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2016

Yes! ! Many are too busy in life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2016

To breath the speed of life we imagine and trust with time. Very amazingly written this poem is really. Wise and interesting sharing...10

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Unwritten Soul 07 August 2016

Yes dear Lyn, every single word you write here is nothing but truth...i agree with you...beautiful reminder for us, like what you said we need to live to feel to breathe...in the pace of speed of life

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Tracy Craighead 15 September 2015

What is life about anyway? Time flies by so fast as we spin our wheels, thank you for your words...slow down...look around

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Chasing and updating things in life Beautiful thought Thumbs up Herbert Guitang

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 01 May 2015

A most thoughtful verse! A fine message! Dorothy APWLTS

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Nick Kler 23 April 2015

Living in itself is such a phenomenal occurrence, it never revels itself. Some people are living but they are actually dead and some that we think are dead are actually living this life. Nevertheless, great sentiments, thought provoking. Thanks

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Elena Sandu 22 February 2015

True poem. The time seems to run so fast these days that it almost feels that I am also running out of sitting space. Everywhere I go or do there is something to do, a need to rush.. One day I hope we will all unite our hearts to a time where space invites us to lay down right away instead of running out....

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Elisha Wall 22 January 2015

We Need to live To feel To breathe The Speed of Life Perhaps, when we breath in the speed of life then can we realise that we are hustling the ultimate gift, and not living! A lovely pice!

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Douglas Scotney 06 November 2014

It invented ways of going faster, so I guess the life form sees value in it. It might be a treadmill though.

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Ken E Hall 26 August 2014

Speed of life is so so true your words are on the pulse of busy lives...but there is a light at the end of the tunnel...retirement and its great providing you don't wear yourself out and dance the years away...cheers Lyn

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 08 January 2013

that is what happens in the developed nations, but in developing nation people want the hectic life! Let us live our life peacefully!

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Tony Karas 30 December 2012

So true. Such an important message. Thankfully... such headlong rushing is far behind me. Now, t last, I've slowed down and can enjoy life and my grandkids (when my beast permits it) .

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Tony Karas 30 December 2012

So true. Such an important message. Thankfully... such headlong rushing is far behind me. Now, t last, I've slowed down and can enjoy life and my grandkids (when my beast permits it) .

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Smoky Hoss 22 December 2012

So correct, so true........ why do we do what we do....... good poem.

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Matthew Peel 21 December 2012

I really like this poem.... Great work! Looking forward to reading more.

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