I have something to confess
I see myself in a big mess
My heart got lost and can't find its address
I loved him and his reaction was meaningless
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Speechless! That what I feel now, it's a real piece of art, each color in this poem was chosen accurately, Keep the good work, and keep impressing us :) 10+
Yes i believe and you believe too in love may he makes us weak in way but he makes us feel and sense life and that is speechless well done I love it thanks
I believe that I have felt like this at certain (difficult) times in my life. Nicely expressed :)
mohammaed: that's the point.. : D thank you for your advice the last time i read English poem from 5: 6 years ago: D thank you all [3 [3
HI, AYA.IT'S A NICE POEM, BUT I LIKE TO PAY YOUR ATTENTION THAT WHEN YOU WRITE POETRY IN ENGLISH TRY TO FORGET YOUR MOTHER LANGUAGE AND TRY TO BE LIKE THE ENGLISH PEOPLE. I THINK ENGLISH WHEN I WRITE ENGLISH.THANKS.
Extremely well done. (((hug))) . Dunno why but nothing ever takes my ratings... I gave it a 10.
A lost and saddened heart can be found and made happy again.Yes we are at a lost for words when someone breaks our heart. Love will come again and will be better. Very touching.