Sunday, March 4, 2012
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She couldn't let me go
I couldn't leave home
We were both afraid
To lose each other
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Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo)
04 March 2012
Deep poem.. Of yours... Very interesting there, despite the saddness... Great work
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9/5/2025 10:16:16 PM # 1.0.0
This has weight and power. Might help if poem offered just a bit more context, some additional hard details. There's definitely something real and emotionally riveting here but I feel with extraordinary attention could be even better.