Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Speechless Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stood speechless in front of you.
There was so much to say, so much to do
But i just stood speechless in front of you.
Though you sat in front of me, i still kept dreaming about you,
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 February 2016

A impressive write, love it.

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The Lost.. 25 November 2009

more than wonderful.. i think all lovers stand speechless infront of the one they love...anyways well done and thnx for sharing :)

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Chitra - 20 November 2009

speechless...emotional journey a 10+

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Mohammed Hassan 18 November 2009

I like this one sweet words and sweet thoughts keep it up i give you 10

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a wonderful piece.... good decision at the end.

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John Knight 17 November 2009

Hi Elsee Angel - So often the unspoken word speaks louder than the spoken. Sometimes our dreams are more real than reality. All relationships leave us with indelible memories of PLACES - SPECIAL DAYS and espeially of SONGS. A time of parting is mega difficult and we can't always verbilize what we ant to say at the moment of parting -our lips mouth the words but the parting is silent. This is something we have all experienced 'Too sad for words' but as time goes on the bad memories fade (trust me on this!) and we only remember the good times. A very emotive poem Elsee - well done TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

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Joseph Poewhit 17 November 2009

Sometimes we just get caught up.

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Tobias Gray 17 November 2009

very beautiful! 10+!

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Obinna Eruchie 17 November 2009

You were so caught in the feeling not to say anything for your lips were bound by its force. Nice words!

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 17 November 2009

The immersion of the individual self in love is very well portrayed.

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Nikunj Sharma 17 November 2009

nicely written, capturing feelings in your sweet words..........good poem

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